How does this plot idea sound?

It sounds like a really complicated plot so it was hard to understand, i think it'll work better once you've turned it into a story, though by the sounds of it was good and would be something i would read. My first piece of advice is to make it a bit more simple, or at least when your writing the story make it easy to understand what's going on. My second bit of advice is don't give away your plot online, it might get stolen.