What do you honestly think about this story? I need feedback!?

It is a perfect short story. Don't let anyone tell you different. To me it is whole and complete. You must have done a few drafts to get it this readable. And I think your ideas are very good. I like the world you have made in such a few number of words. It is very important for people to find a balance between what is right and wrong. I love the language you use. And I think you have secured a target audience. I hope you had fun creating it. It sure sounds like you had some fun. Please try to write some more stuff that interests you. Take care, a fellow writer.